That looks great on the new home page! Thanks for those changes. A couple of issues.
1) I think you missed this edit though (the main text, not the title which was changed):
OLD VERSION ->
Whonix is a desktop operating system designed for advanced security and privacy. It realistically addresses attacks while maintaining usability. It makes online anonymity possible via fail-safe, automatic, and desktop-wide use of the Tor network. A heavily reconfigured Debian base is run inside multiple virtual machines, providing a substantial layer of protection from malware and IP leaks. Pre-installed, pre-configured applications are ready for use, and installing additional applications or personalizing the desktop will in no way jeopardize the user. Whonix is the only actively developed OS designed to be run inside a VM and paired with Tor.
SUGGESTED CHANGE ->
Whonix is a desktop operating system designed for advanced security and privacy. Whonix mitigates the threat of common attack vectors while maintaining usability. Online anonymity is realized via fail-safe, automatic, and desktop-wide use of the Tor network. A heavily reconfigured Debian base is run inside multiple virtual machines, providing a substantial layer of protection from malware and IP address leaks. Commonly used applications are pre-installed and safely pre-configured for immediate use. The user is not jeopardized by installing additional applications or personalizing the desktop. Whonix is under active development and is the only operating system designed to be run inside a VM and paired with Tor.
The original version is a bit awkward e.g. 1st and 2nd lines both starting with "It"; 5th line need to be separated into two and reworded for clarity etc.
Since that is a dead link on the new home page, and the current Whonix FAQ needs a bit of editing ->
Shall I start a new thread here about it, or just edit it for linking purposes?
I'm not sure some of that stuff in the FAQ is actually relevant to many users, or it will not be in the future e.g. PAE crashes, Whonix being 32-bit (fixed next release), "patches welcome", "patches required" etc. as there are hardly any forums posts about the above.
This suggests the FAQ be split ala Qubes.org into:
Patches etc belong in the latter category.
Also, as opposed to a huge blob of bullet points, ideally the FAQ will separate out issues by category e.g. "Whonix-Gateway", "Alternative Operating Systems", "Tor Browser", "Possible Compromise", "Whonix Development Scheme" etc.
It's user-unfriendly at the moment.