It is very good, but I have some last minute nit suggestions (take or leave)
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SecBrowser is a security focused browser that provides better protection from exploits, thereby reducing the risk of a virus infection.
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SecBrowser is a security-focused browser that provides better protection from exploits, thereby reducing the risk of infection from malicious, arbitrary code.
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Enhanced usability is achieved with a built-in security slider that can be used to easily disable web site features that increase attack surface such as JavaScript.
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A built-in security slider provides enhanced usability, as website features which increase the attack surface (like JavaScript) can be easily disabled.
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In the default configuration, SecBrowser offers better security than Firefox, Google Chrome or Microsoft Edge without any customizations necessary.[1]
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Without any customization, SecBrowser’s default configuration offers better security than Firefox, Google Chrome or Microsoft Edge.[1]
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It also has better protections from online tracking, fingerprinting and reduces users linkability across websites.
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It also provides better protection from online tracking, fingerprinting and the linkability of activities across different websites.
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time consuming → time-consuming
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While users can install browser extensions to mitigate specific attack vectors. Its unlikely to compare to SecBrowser which leverages the experience and know how of the Tor Project devs and the battle tested Tor Browser.
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While browser extensions can be installed to mitigate specific attack vectors, this ad hoc approach is insufficent. SecBrowser leverages the experience and knowledge of skilled Tor Project developers, and the battle-tested Tor Browser.
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Security Slider: Lets you increase your security by disabling certain web features that could be used to attack your security.[4]
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Security Slider: Enables improved security by disabling certain web features that can be used as attack vectors.[4]
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Tor Browser can be installed using tb-updater which is a package developed and maintained by Whonix developers. When run, tb-updater seamlessly automates the download and verification of Tor Browser (from The Tor Project’s website).
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Tor Browser can be installed using tb-updater, which is a package developed and maintained by Whonix developers. When run, tb-updater seamlessly automates the download and verification of Tor Browser (from The Tor Project website).
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Moreover, for users that have a requirement for a security focused clearnet browser (SecBrowser), tb-updater comes with the functionality to disable Tor prebaked into the source.
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Another benefit of tb-updater is the ability to disable Tor is pre-baked into the source code, so a security-focused clearnet browser (SecBrowser) is readily available.
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To disable Tor, users need only configure the tb_clearnet=true option in the initial set up.[10] Unlike other methods that require users to manually disable Tor, this greatly simplifies configuration and lessons the chances that a configuration error will be made.
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To disable Tor, only the tb_clearnet=true option needs to be configured during the initial set up.[10] Unlike other manual methods of disabling Tor, this greatly simplifies the procedure and lessens the chance of a configuration error.
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However, as outlined in this Qubes issue downloading GPG keys with APT will fail in TemplateVMs.
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However, as outlined in this Qubes issue, downloading GPG keys with APT will fail in TemplateVMs.
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Compare the fingerprint displayed in the terminal to the one listed at the following link; Patrick Schleizer - Whonix.
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Compare the fingerprint displayed in the terminal to the one listed at the following link: Patrick Schleizer - Whonix.
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it can safely be ignored → it can be safely ignored
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to the sources.list.
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to sources.list
create a new folder /rw/config/torbrowser.d.
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create a new folder /rw/config/torbrowser.d
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To start SecBrowser, in a dom0 terminal, run.
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To launch SecBrowser, run this command in a dom0 terminal.
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Which is what you want when using the tb_clearnet=true option.
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This notice is both expected and desired when using the tb_clearnet=true option.
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Security Slider: SecBrowser has a “Security Slider” in the shield menu that allows you to increase security by disabling certain web features that can be used to attack your security. By default, the Security Slider is set to “Standard” which is the lowest security level. Increasing SecBrowser’s security level will prevent some web pages from functioning properly, so you should weigh your security needs against the degree of usability you require.
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Security Slider: SecBrowser has a “Security Slider” in the shield menu. This can increase security by disabling certain web features that are possible attack vectors. By default, the Security Slider is set to “Standard” which is the lowest security level. Increasing SecBrowser’s security level will prevent some web pages from functioning properly, so security needs must be weighed against the degree of usability that is required.
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This setting prevents browsing and download history as well as cookies from remaining persistent across SecBrowser restarts.
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This setting prevents the persistence of cookies, as well as browsing and download history across SecBrowser restarts.
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The user loses protection which aims to prevent for example, “activities from an earlier browser session from being linkable to a later session”. If security is paramount users can enable private browsing mode by commenting out the corresponding user preference.
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This means users are vulnerable to attacks which can link activities between earlier and later browsing sessions. If security is paramount, then enable private browsing mode by commenting out the corresponding user preference.
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When completed, the corresponding line should look like the following text block. (x3)
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Check the text block is identical to the one below.
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The extensions Disconnect, Privacy Badger and uBlock Origin are all open-source and are generally recommended.
comment only: What about canvas image extraction blockers e.g. highly fingerprintable?
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Keep in mind that all NoScript preference will be overridden and all custom per-site settings lost, if the SecBrowser “Security Slider” setting is changed afterwards. This holds true regardless if the security setting was increased or decreased.
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If the SecBrowser “Security Slider” setting is changed afterwards, all NoScript preferences are overridden and all custom, per-site settings are lost. This holds true regardless of whether the security setting was increased or decreased.
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If you prefer to disable persistent NoScript setting this can easily be done by commenting out the corresponding user_pref.
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If the persistent NoScript setting is undesirable, this can easily be disabled by commenting out the corresponding user_pref.
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such as user names or password → such as user names or passwords
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To implement this, signon.rememberSignons is set to true in which allows this information to be saved across browser sessions.
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To implement this signon.rememberSignons is set to true, thereby allowing this information to be saved across browser sessions.
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If you prefer to disable this feature open user.js in an editor and comment out the corresponding user_pref.
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If this feature is undesirable, it can be disabled by opening user.js in an editor and commenting out the corresponding user_pref.
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This term has two meaning.[12] → This term has two meanings.[12]
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which can be used to change browser configuration and behavior.
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which can be used to change the browser configuration and behavior.
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config snippett → config snippet
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the corresponding Tor Browser profile were the custom
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the corresponding Tor Browser profile where the custom
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Tor is disabled by setting these three preferences to false.
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Tor is disabled by setting the following three preferences to false.
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VMs behind a sys-whonix are always routed through Tor, traffic would still be torified.
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VMs behind sys-whonix are always routed through Tor, which means traffic would still be torified.
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Yes, but this could degrade security and privacy. see: Normalizing SecBrowser behavior.
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Yes, but this could degrade security and privacy; see Normalizing SecBrowser behavior.
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Yes, but this could degrade security and privacy. See: Normalizing SecBrowser behavior.
- Can I submit patch? → Can I submit a patch?