I like that. There is a noticeable differenece. Most of the book like structures I’ve seen have more information added to the header . Like the beginning to a new chapter in a book. Would look even better.
For example,
Before:
Vision
- multiple boot modes for better security: persistent + root | persistent + noroot | live + root | live + noroot
- Disable SUID Binaries
- (re-)mount home (and other?) with noexec (and nosuid (among other useful mount options)) for better security
- walled garden, firewall whitelisting, application whitelisting, sudo lockdown, superuser mode, protected mode
After:
Vision “more descriptive title”