An incredible amount of work.
I fear you unfortunately misinterpreted the goal I tried to formulate in
https://forums.whonix.org/t/splitting-whonix-documentation-into-a-short-and-long-edition-for-better-usability.
In essence, this single page Whonix Documentation is a mess currently. Too big. It should be replaced by a a shorter version. The goal was just a shorter, better table of contents. Not to rewrite the existing documentation pages.
A quick-start guide can be useful, but at it’s current length and detail it’s not really quick start. Quite expert, detailed.
Please do not take this as discouragement. There is a huge amount of improved documentation that should be merged. Such as “What is Whonix”, “Should I use Whonix”, “Whonix Advantages and Disadvantages” and a lot more I have not read yet.
Such a huge amount of suggestions is difficult to handle in one thread.
Can you please suggest all your suggestions step by step into Whonix wiki? Why not let’s start with “Whonix Advantages and Disadvantages”. Looks like that belongs to Features, Advantages, Use Cases - Whonix? Looks like you got better wording, additions and what not.
For non-controversial changes, just edit the wiki. For other stuff, open new forum threads.
- Leave out physical isolation.
- Leave out KVM. The decision VirtualBox vs KVM is impossible to make and the current length of the KVM instructions and difficulty makes that geek-only.
- Keep Qubes. Although that adds confusion and most Qubes users would learn about Whonix through other means, Qubes is sponsoring most of my development time. So it cannot be left out.
More points to leave out to make it shorter:
- AppArmor
Some more but that should be enough for now.