Long Wiki Edits Thread

OK - just the email Mt Everest entry to update, and Section 10 will be finished. (these wiki approvers can’t keep up :wink: ). Then I’ll move on to the money section proper.

Lots of activity on the website and dev areas these days. Professional website appearance, solid wiki, good forum moderating etc. all adds up to a quality product and attracts quality human resources and contributions. Which also increases user base, # of Tor users and improves everyone’s overall anonymity. Good sign.

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Esoteric, Non Anonymous Onion Encryption and NAT Traversal - Kicksecure candidate for Advanced Documentation.

Created a new Windows Quick Start page although its rather large so I’m not sure it meets the definition of “Quick Start”. Download links look good. There is a yet to be created download link that needs to be added by me.

https://whonix.org/w/index.php?title=Windows_Qubes_Start&oldid=50409&diff=cur

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It meets quality standards as in good enough for a call for accepting wiki changes. Could even go to a call for testers. Some nits.

https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Windows_Qubes_Start - I guess Qubes has no place in page URL?

Perhaps move to https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Windows_Testers_Only_Version during testing?

That would match

And…

Whonix Windows Installer - Testers Only Version would e a bit weird, long?

Whonix for Windows, macOS, Linux inside VirtualBox currently redirects to Whonix for Windows, macOS, Linux inside VirtualBox. Not sure about if we want a redirect or two pages a long and a short version?

The initial version of the quick start guide looks more like the full verification instruction version.

Pages such as:

where dumbed down. Hidden by default download table, hidden and expandable by default verification instructions. OpenPGP/gpg verification for most users just is not realistic. I am not sure it can still be improved on Whonix side. We already support https (decent server TLS support), onion download (few will understand that). New users will just a swamped by the page length and length of instructions, just give up and use hidemyass (seen) or something similar instead. It’s important that new/first time users of Whonix (already complicated enough due to split-VM design and run in VM by default, Linux based…) have a quick path and feeling of success quickly.

Specifically on the Windows platform, the idea of a Whonix Windows Installer is to dumb down even further. However, by requiring to learn gpg verification and install other software before Whonix

OpenPGP/gpg verification: If you have a better idea in mind or ever see a better solution implemented anywhere, please open a new forum thread about this.


Import the Intevation CA Certificate

  • Trust GeoTrust
  • import a new certificate
  • root of trust: as secure as SSL

Install SignTools

  • root of trust: as secure as SSL

Download and Verify GPG4win

  • root of trust: as secure as SSL

instructions on whonix.org on gpg verification in the first place

Well, an adversary capable of changing download for targeted users in first place could also prevent these from learning about gpg in the first place from the same website. Only prior knowledge on gpg and verification through OpenPGP web of trust would prevent installation of maliciously modified downloads.

I guess what we’re doing is increasing the awareness about software verification generally and for the next download rather than securing the actual initial download?


And at no point, the user has any path to verify gpg4win through the The OpenPGP Web of Trust. Not sure if worth we’ll being the first ones (?) to point that out and document?

Intevation, the company that hosts GnuPG does not maintain a secure TLS site for gpg4win .[3]

Well, if upstream is broken, there is little we can do.

gpg is a dinosaur, I am quite negative about it and would like to see it replaced with something of today’s knowledge on usability.

  • MachineClosePower Off .

This is not good since this is a hard power off. Should only be used if Whonix hangs. Otherwise the usual shutdown mechanisms from inside the VM should be preferred.

Figure: Whonix user interface

Perhaps reduce size a bit? Looks much bigger than original on the actual screen? No new screenshot needed. Mediawiki allows somehow image resize, we are using that elsewhere in wiki somewhere.

Overall, amazing job on! Now have resurrected Whonix Windows Installer and better documentation. Yay!

Not sure what happened with that. Not intentional.

Sounds good.

Odd and might be a little confusing.

Keep mostly as with these modifications to https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Windows

Currently

Please choose:

Change to:(?)

Please choose:

  • A) Whonix with XFCE Expedited Setup (recommended for first time users to beginners (Quick and easy setup/configutation); or

  • B) Whonix with XFCE (recommended for beginners to intermediate users); or

  • C) Whonix with CLI. (recommended for intermediate to advanced users)

Yes. So the Whonix Installer docs could be seen (in terms of usabilty ONLY) a Live CD. Users just want to try out the distribion without the hastel of gpg verification or anything Cli… “I just want to get Whonix installed so I can start using it.” Simple is what they are used to with Windows. For myself, and before Whonix, I never realy had a use for the termimal in Windows.

OK, I’m sure there is a better solution somewhere.

Not just for verification (for security) but also to prevent unneeded support requests due to corrupted images (non MITM attacks) . Maybe certutil | Microsoft Learn (Windows built-in) could simply be used to ensure the Whonix Installer was not corrupted during download. Meaning verifying the checksum.

Definatly not for first time Whonix/linux users.

OK wasn’t aware of that. I’ll remove.

Tried to resize using Gimp but wasn’t successful. I forgot about Mediawiki resize which was brought up recently. I’ll see about shrinking tha png.

Thanks! I’ll revive the original Quick start (you mentioned in email) with the changes. Just to be clear,

  • maybe mention Whonix Installer verification with a link. But not imposing.
  • Add download link to 0brand.asc and Whonix installer signature
  • No gpg Cli.
  • Very simple (get Whoinx in Windows installed so users can get going)
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We can keep it even simpler for Windows users. XFCE version only. Everything else on a by search/by ask basis.

Btw Whonix VirtualBox images nowadays contain a manifest. Once imported, images should be fine. Non-malicious corrupted downloads are excluded due to integrated hash check by VirtualBox (manifest). (Maliciously modified downloads could have the hashsums in the manifest modified as well or somehow manifest hash check disabled.)

Haven’t herd of certutil but there is also signcode. (No preference yet. Little knowledge on Windows native digital signatures by me yet.)
(These tools can also be used on the Linux platform. If I was to figure out how to use these, I could automate creating such signatures during build of Whonix.)

(VirtualBox also has some kind of native signing but no one figured it out yet and we couldn’t use it since Whonix Windows Installer as a necessity wraps around it. References:

Just now remembered I did reserach Windows native software signatures a while ago and even tweet about it (also as note to self):

https://twitter.com/Whonix/status/1097805887438241792

story here:
Release Windows gifski.exe with a digital signature · ImageOptim/gifski · GitHub

There would be a lot of support requests if Whonix in Cli link was removed from that page. Better to leave it there imo.

I have the Whonix Installer Quick Start page section complete but haven’t decided where to put it on the XFCE page. Its Very minimal and verification is for advanced user only. For those users I’m going to provide a link to the yet to be created (https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Windows_Testers_Only_Version#Verify_Whonix_Installer)

BTW I did try resizing that image in Mediawiki but I’m not sure its was possible since that png only had one size. Lots of the other png images has multiple sizes to choose from. Anyways I save all my screenshots and I usually create a bunch for later use such as the new Stop Whonix image I uploaded. It was actually simple to resize in thunar (was having resolution issues with Gimp. )

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New Windows Quick Start section has been added. Tried to get a little separation from the Long configuration section. Can the second section be given a better name other than “Long Whonix configuration”? I haven’t added a header for that section.

https://whonix.org/w/index.php?title=VirtualBox/XFCE&oldid=46669&diff=cur

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I don’t think Whonix for Windows, macOS, Linux inside VirtualBox should include Whonix Windows Quick Start as a whole.

Previously it said:

1. Download Whonix Whonix old logo.png XFCE for Windows Windows logo - 2012.svg.png, Mac Rsz osx.png and Linux Tux.png FREE

thereby highlighting platform support.

By adding Windows Quick Start: on top, likely hood of non-Windows user bouncing away gets higher.

Instead we could add a link saying

Windows users can use the easy [[Windows_Quick_Start|Whonix Windows Installer]] instead.

The short instructions you just wrote could replace:

In essence for Windows users, ideally just need a single fat download button.

…and perhaps some screenshots and short instructions, looking easy, as encouragement. Whonix has been a tool to convert Windows users to first time Linux desktop users.

Whonix for Windows, macOS, Linux inside VirtualBox currently only looks the same like Whonix for Windows, macOS, Linux inside VirtualBox due to previous absence of Whonix Windows Installer.


Could you please rename the page

since it still incldues Qubes?


Btw there is also:

These pages are for users who use search engines. Search engine optimization (SEO). The best way to optimize things, I think, is to create landing pages which truthfully describe the status. These landing pages make it concise and abundantly clear, that what the searcher is looking for is explicitly possible.

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Misunderstanding. Thought you wanted all XFCE on one page. :slightly_smiling_face:

Simple and to the point? Note sure if this is the best spot for it.

https://www.whonix.org/w/index.php?title=Template:VirtualBox&stable=0

Done.

Done. Moved:

https://whonix.org/wiki/Windows_Testers_Only_Version

So all these pages are very specific content. No gray areas, what you see is what you get.

A lot of pages have {{Anchor|Landing}}. Is it important to have {{Anchor|Landing}} as opposed to " = Introduction = " Or is that just preference?

I wonder if the verify section for SecBrowser in Microsoft Windows should be sim;ified as well? It looks a bit to long . Maybe collapse the verify section. Would have to shuffle things around as well.

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A bit of a legacy link.
Download Whonix (FREE) links to #Landing. #Landing could be different from introduction.
Not very important and could be redesigned.

Yes, since the threat model on Windows is broken anyhow.
I doubt there are any Windows users who verify all of their software using the web of trust or similarly clever to verify all their software downloads.

Having documentation on Windows verification though is great to show how broken things on the Windows platform are. To through what length people have to go due to some mess caused by various upstream.

Let the Whonix ™ Windows Installer set up Whonix ™ Whonix old logo.png XFCE in VirtualBox Virtualbox logo.png for you. FREE

The Whonix ™ Windows Installer was developed with a focus on providing users with an fast and easy method to install Whonix ™ in Microsoft Windows. This gives users the opportunity to experiment with Whonix ™ in a familiar environment without the necessity of complex virtual machine imports or host operating system changes. When the whonix-installer.exe is executed, the latest VirtualBox version and both Whonix ™ VMs are seamlessly installed on the Windows machine. From there, users can immediately start using Whonix ™ with no further configuration required.[1]

This introduction is well written but is it required from the perspective of a first time visitor? Expected in a similar fashion as viewing any other usual Windows software? I think no. Using the razor blade for simplification.

Moved here: Whonix Virtualization Platforms

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Also even Tor Project went the route of radical simplification. See https://www.torproject.org which links to Tor Project | Download. Speculation: They might have hired a usability designer who then talked them into changing that.

Simplified Whonix ™ for Windows, macOS, Linux inside VirtualBox

We can’t really teach users to do OpenPGP verification on the download page. Users visit new websites with their with existing experience, knowledge and expectations. That’s not easily redireced. Verification of software signatures is a skill.

Downloading signing keys, signatures over https, from the same source as the actual software does not improve actual security. Verification of software signatures isn’t a copy/paste skill. It requires critical thinking, intelligence. Because if an adversary would replace the contents of the website, they’d next time just write “OpenPGP verification no longer required because now built-in, automated” and many users would buy it without questioning.

Users mostly can’t learn software signature verification of Whonix from whonix.org. And even if they could, they woulnd’t have needed it for Whonix (otherwise adversaries already feeding them fake information). Users might learn the concept of software verification from us generally though at some point.

In the past when Whonix downloads were hosted on other websites other than whonix.org without SSL support (mirrors; sourceforge) having the gpg verification instructions on whonix.org download page made more sense.

Software signature verification is for a smaller part only something that one can offer. For the bigger part however, software signature verification only works when there is demand for it.

  • Who is the vendor of the software?
  • Does the vendor of the software sign their releases?
  • How does the vendor of the software sign their releases?
  • How to safely acquire the signing key of the software vendor?
  • How to safely acquire the software used for software signature verification?
  • Why did the signing key allegedly change this time? Has there been a plausible explanation?

That is because if the case which software signature verification tries to prevent happens - that is contents of lets way whonix.org replaced with malicious contents - then users already need to know that kind of mindset.

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Whonix ™ for Windows, macOS, Linux inside VirtualBox could use a screenshot (or even gif if mediawiki supports that?) for double clicking the Whonix Windows Installer. Similar to File:Whonix desktop starter.png - Whonix.

I was previously planning on submitting an enhancement request to Tor Project because users are redirected to Tor Project | Success after the download link (Windows tor browser installer) is clicked. I couldn’t understand why users where not given the opportuaty to download the sig file before redirecting to that page. It didn’t make sense until now. That happens even when the Linux download link is clicked.

Observation: Tor Project has Donate links everywhere.

We need your help to keep Tor secure and safe for millions across the globe. Donate Now

I previosly created a Whonix Windows Installer screenshot but I don’t like it,so didn’t add to that page. I’ll see about a gif.

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Even with the big download button https://www.whonix.org/wiki/Template:VirtualBox might be a little confusing with all of the links?

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Yeah, I just can’t be concise sometimes. Remove links for Windows, MacOS and Linux?

Reminds me… Generally and long term I would also encourage to get rid of [Expand] buttons and to move that content to other pages instead. Those disabling javascript by default, i.e. users of Tor Browser with security slider setting to highest and those using SecBrowser will see those pages auto expanded by default. There is was (yet?) to have collapsed/expanded switch without javascript.

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GIFs are supported using the same syntax [[Image:some.gif]] . Pushed to live wiki.

https://www.whonix.org/w/index.php?title=Windows_Quick_Start&stable=0

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That gif is 10/10. Very illustrative. :slight_smile: